After yesterday's class, our work are being critised and commented. I think everyone's works are great! Give yourself a pat on your back.
First Picture, critics received:
1) Background is obsolete, too distracting.
2) 'O' not recognised straightaway, classmates tot is a 'd' instead.
First Picture, critics received:
1) Background is obsolete, too distracting.
2) 'O' not recognised straightaway, classmates tot is a 'd' instead.
2nd Picture:
1) Background very un-natural.
2) Animals too small.
3) Should change rabbit to another animal.
Added: 19th April
Really I feel that the animals are really a bad idea, I thought of another hate to do... TOMATOES!
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